Sunday, November 21, 2010

Poetry 11-21-10

I understand, 
spoken soft 
truth, 
love, 
trees & vines of 
wild lies 
so honest they cripple 
when tangled and brittle,
so honest they cripple
wild lies 
trees & vines of 
love, 
truth,
spoken soft 
I understand.
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  1. AnonymousNovember 22, 2010 at 7:19 AM

    Oh my gosh...that's the coolest structure of a poem I've ever seen. At first I thought it was just parallelism and then I realized it was backwards!

    Awesome job. The poem is amazing, the message is amazing, the structure is amazing -- and it must have taken so long to make it work both ways. You rock!

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